Monday, November 2, 2009

Final Thoughts on AP Composition

The end of the quarter is always bittersweet. It's always exciting to get new classes, but sad to reminisce on all of the fun times you've had in your current classes. Just a warning, this post is going to be random and include little blurbs on my opinions, etc.

My favorite memory (along with the rest of the class I'm sure) is when the one and only Gus Kunkle came to visit us! Mr.Kunkle if you're reading this, please bring Gus back so we can see him again! He was the cutest little kid I've ever met. That should mean a lot coming from me (the kid hater). haha

Initally, I really enjoyed reading The Things They Carried. However, I have a different opinion now. It is still very saddening to hear the effects that have lasted on the soldiers after many decades, but frankly, I'm getting tired of it. I understand the pain they've gone through, but Tim O'Brien doesn't need to keep dragging it out. I've noticed that he likes to repeat certain stories OVER AND OVER again. I'm not a big fan of redundancy, so this is slowly getting on my nerves. The first half of the book, I have to admit, was very very well-written and enjoyable to read.

I hope that I won't lose any of the valuable vocabulary, reading, and writing skills by not having this class for a whole quarter. I feel that I made some progress in the vocab & reading department, but not so much the writing portion. (Kunk, you'll read about this in my portfolio.) I don't really know where my writing is going at this point, but hopefully it's in the right direction.

Tuesday, October 27, 2009

The Importance of Good Health

Think of health in any way you want, it could be physical health, mental health, intellectual health, and overall health. Without your health, it's difficult to make it through the day. I've seen so many examples of poor health lately that it's been bringing me down (even though all aspects of my health are doing just fine). I thought I should get the message out and put in my two cents.

In our current book The Things They Carried, it seems to me that the soldiers are not in perfect health. They are fighting in a foreign land in a place filled with diseases (malaria, etc.) and also getting wounded or worse, killed, every day. Once soldiers return home from war, they are very likely to suffer from post-traumatic stress disorder that will impair with their lives (Thank you, AP Psych). Clearly, war is not good for the physical or mental health of the young men and women of America.

It seems if the small fishbowl formally known as McFarland High School is fighting a war of its own: The Swine Flu! It's a rare occasion to have every single student present in a classroom because of this terrible illness. Even in our seven person AP Comp class, we usually have at least one person gone! Stock up on sanitizer everyone and wash those hands!!

On Sunday, a person who I am lucky enough to call my best friend had to go to the hospital. This person is still there three days later. I went to visit last night (as I'll continue to do every night), and it broke my heart. More than anything, my friend needs to be healthy. I've realized that there are so many unhealthy people surrounding me and in the news that I should be truly grateful for how healthy I am.

Thursday, October 22, 2009

Riots in Madison, WI Hit Home for Me

A little more than forty years ago, there were student protests occurring right on our very own UW-Madison campus. As some of you may know, my grandpa Richard Osterloth (who passed away in 2006) was one of the brave police officers who was involved in the Dow riots. Sadly, he was hit in the head with a cinder block from a mean student and had to be rushed to the hospital. In his living room, he had a large photograph of him in the crowd of students right before he was attacked. In seventh grade I interviewed him about this for my history class. It meant a lot to me to watch Two Days in October because it felt like it brought me a little closer to my grandpa, whom I miss very very much!

I felt like Two Days in October really captured both sides of the Vietnam War. Actually, I didn't know anything about this war (except what my grandpa had told me), so it was nice to hear both the United States and Vietnam viewpoints instead of just the biased US one. Overall, it was a very enjoyable movie.

Our novel, The Things They Carried, is also very intriguing to read. I'm not really a war geek, but I think I'll enjoy reading this novel about the war. I felt very empathetic for Tim O'Brian when he found out that he was drafted. I would've had an IMPOSSIBLE time deciding if I should run away or leave for war and potentially die.

After reading Lampert Smith's essay, Times Have Changed For Student Protesters, I must admit that I was a little bit appalled. If students think they'd rather watch Grey's Anatomy than protest, they obviously aren't very dedicated or devoted to their cause. Clearly, they're being lazy. I think new technologies like texting and facebook would be helpful for spreading the word about protesting--but getting your lazy butt off the couch is the first step here.

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Johnathon Swift...AKA Baby Eater

About a minute or two into after listening to Mr. Kunkle read a piece by Johnathon Swift, I caught on to the main argument of the essay. Frankly, it was disgusting! I couldn't believe some of his crazy ideas and statements that he made. Who would ever want to wear gloves or boots that originated from baby skin! I think that I'd heave if I even saw a pair. EW! Despite the grotesque-ness of the article, the statement "Baby skin would always be in season, but especially in March" really made me laugh. It just sounded so ludicrous! Unfortunately, I was a little too slow to catch on to his whole "satirical" nature of the essay. I figured that he was some psycho lunatic that had a craving for babies at the time. Nevertheless, it really made my day more, well, interesting.

Swift did make a valid point, though. At the time there were so many poverty-stricken women desperately trying to support a handful of children. It seemed that no matter what, they'd be dealt a life of poverty and suffering. It makes sense that if you have an abundance of something and you're lacking in money, it would be smart to sell it! However, it's DEFINITELY unethical to sell, eat, or wear babies. I suggest selling a baseball card collection or some vintage furniture.

Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Illegal Smuggling on the Mexican Border

For Kirsten's discussion, she chose the article "The Business of Human Smuggling on the Mexican Border." Although I did enjoy reading this article and having a classroom discussion, there were a few points I tried to make that I feel weren't taken very seriously. Luckily we have things called blogs where we can post whatever we feel like or simply want to say on the internet!

I have been visiting the Blue Plate restaurant ever since I was born (my grandparents seem to be the local celebrities there). When I was a small child, my grandma introduced me to one of the cooks, Luis. He was a very nice man despite the fact that he barely spoke English. My grandma told me that he had a daughter the same age as me living back in Mexico with the rest of the family.

"Why does he live here grandma?" I questioned
"Because he needs to make more money for himself and his family," she replied.

Her answer didn't help. I still had my questions--like why would he move to America? What's so great about it? Can't he just work in Mexico closer to his family? The answer is no. America has more job opportunities and also better wages. Mexico is plagued with poverty in virtually every town. They can't make as much money, and they have to worry about surviving every day. For many, moving to America is their only hope. Their sole intention is to work hard for their families and return once they have enough money.

I'm pretty sure that most people and government officials think otherwise. Yes, it is illegal to smuggle oneself over here, but the Mexicans don't have bad intentions in mind. In fact, if they get caught committing crimes they'll likely get in loads of trouble. I think that we shouldn't be so hard on them, given the tough life they've had to live. They're going to have our minimum wage and hard labor jobs no matter what the rules are, so we should try to make them a little more fair and give them a better opportunity.

I have also worked at Buffalo Wild Wings for two years and gotten to know the cooks very well. They're all so nice and friendly--and they also do not seem to have the intention to harm anyone. I'm very close friends with some of them and I'd hate to see anything bad happen to them. Many have moved from Mexico to support their families--some are just teenagers who moved here by themselves to make money for their parents even! I can't believe all of the harsh things that I hear being said about my friends; it's not fair to make such an unfair judgement unless you get to meet one.

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Living in Poverty

I heard the sound of my heart breaking after reading the second "What is Poverty?" essay. I always hear how good I have it, and it's hard to really appreciate everything until you see or read about someone who is much less fortunate than you are. In this case, it was Jo Goodwin Parker.

I felt my eyes bulge out of my head and my jaw drop to the floor when I read about some of her living conditions. I can't imagine constantly being surrounded by tiny insects and being malnourished. I love good food! It was sad to hear that she can't use warm water because it's too expensive--and she couldn't even buy vaseline because the price went up two cents!!! That's crazy; I wouldn't even give a second thought if something I wanted went up two cents. It makes you really think about how much you want something versus how much you need it.

After reading this heart-wrenching essay, I now have more compassion for those living in poverty. It must be a big struggle for them to even have the will to wake up in the morning. I know that I would pull the plug if I had to live in such adverse conditions! At least Parker had a family that she loved to help her get through it all. At the end of the day, it all boils down to the family that you have in your life. Without them (especially in Parker's case), you've got nothing. It really makes me appreciate my parents more and how much they support me and give me everything they've got to make sure that I live the best life possible!

Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Gus Kunkle for President!

When I first heard that Gus Kunkle was coming to our AP Comp classroom, I have to admit that I was a tad bit frightened. (For those of you who didn't read my last blog, I am scared by children and prefer to not be in their presence.) Gus Kunkle is Kunk's awesome little son! By the time he left, I definitely put him on my short list of children I actually enjoy being around.

As Gus came into the classroom, he immediately ran over to T.J. and gave him a high-five! Then came my favorite part.

"Well guys, I'm four years old!" Gus exclaimed as he stuck out his fingers to demonstrate his age.

The class instantly fell in love with this charming young boy. We asked him why he was wearing two different colored socks.

"Because I couldn't find the other one" Gus shyly said.

Man, is this kid ever cute! He actually very closely resembles Mr. Kunkle (almost like a mini-me.)

As Kunk hands Gus his gigantic lunch box, it rapidly falls to the floor. It seemed a little too heavy for this four-year-old to handle. Nonetheless, it was still amusing and precious to watch!

When it was time for Gus to leave, the whole class had a tear in their eyes.

"It was nice meeting all of you" Gus charmingly remarked.

AWW! what a little sweetheart! :)

KUNK---BRING GUS BACK!! WE LOVE HIM!! :)

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

The N-Word

Last night I read/annotated this personal narrative written by a black woman professor. I found parts of her story fascinating to read, and it made me feel sorry for her at times. Obviously, I've never had the experience of growing up as a person of color and experiencing racism, but belive me, I wouldn't want to have to endure it. Bernard obviously has a lot of strength to not let harsh remarks (including the N-Word) leave a chip on her shoulder. I admire this strength in her, partly because I'm lacking in it.

I think I was probably around 10 years old the first time I heard the "N-Word." Growing up in McFarland (a mainly all-white town), I was never really around African Americans. I do belive that I was in school when I learned about it for the first time. The term confused me, mostly because I didn't understand why anyone could call another human being such a harsh name! I'm not one that's fond of swearing or saying anything cruel, so I can't remember a time when I've actually said the word. I've tried to avoid it at all costs, even if I'm in a room with all white people. I just don't feel comfortable saying it. So I understand where Bernard is coming from, because I certainly wouldn't want anyone to call me such a name!

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

What Scares Me

If I were to compose a list of all the things I'm afraid of, the list would extend for ten pages. To be brutally honest, I have pantophobia (a.k.a the fear of everything). I haven't been clinically diagnosed, but I just have unusual, irrational fears that I shouldn't have.

Growing up as the oldest cousin on both sides of the family, I was constantly surrounded by 12 younger cousins. Maybe it was all the babysitting or torment I endured, but now I abhor children. Especially younger children. Once they're about 9 or 10, I can handle them. Otherwise, they completely freak me out. Every time I see a little kid, I feel like they're going to attack me. Just look at them glaring at you with their evil eyes! I'm not crazy, I swear.

I'm also deathly afraid of germs. It grosses me out to see people share drinks or rub their eyes after touching a doorknob. Do you know how many common objects aren't sanitized (such as this school computer keyboard I'm touching)? EWW. I'm shuddering right now at the thought. Time to dig my sanitizer out of my purse.

Along with consuming germs, I'm also terrified of getting long-term or terminal illnesses. I would hate to suffer through cancer or diabetes. I think that's why I avoid junk food (mainly trans fat) at all costs- because I'm afraid of growing older and sicker.

If anyone wanted to knock me down, all they'd have to do is criticize me. I have such an intense fear of being negatively criticized that I frequently go far out of my way just to avoid it. I don't know why I'm so afraid of this. I'm definitely labeled as a perfectionist. Maybe that's why I hate criticism--because I don't want any bad marks that will label me "less than perfect."

Class time is up, but my list of irrational fears continues to grow as the clocks tick. Those who know me understand my fears and try (somewhat) to accommodate as much as possible.

Wednesday, September 16, 2009

"Seeking" brought back old memories!

I was extremely thrilled to read Melissa's essay/article called "Seeking" (really, no sarcasm here!) I took AP psychology last year (which I might add, was my favorite high school class thus far), so it's fair to call myself a huge psych nerd! It's strange how after studying psychology intensely, I notice that psychology is EVERYWHERE and applies to virtually EVERY aspect of life! This essay is no exception.

I am a victim of "seeking," just as many other classmates are as well. It's fascinating to see how we are fueled by receiving text messages and "notifications" on Facebook. I am guilty of intending to use the internet for a short period of time but end up spending a good 45 minutes to an hour simply doing "nothing." It's as if the screen has sucked me in and I become a Facebook Zombie. Once I awake from my trance, I immediately regret wasting so much time online when I could've been doing more productive and useful things.

Anyways, back to psychology. Last year, I learned all about the hypothalamus, which was frequently discussed in this article. There are two parts of the hypothalamus: the lateral and the ventromedial. The lateral hypothalamus was the star of this article, which claimed that if it was to be continually stimulated the labrats would feel so much pleasure that they'd eventually collapse. This is true! We made a little mneumonic device last year to remember the differences between the two parts of the hypothalamus. Lateral sounds like "lunch," so if it is stimulated it drives someone to eat/seek pleasure. If it is destroyed, however, the person will have no will to even eat or be motivated (this was also briefly mentioned in the essay.) Don't laugh, but the ventromedial hypothalamus sounds like "vomit," and thus, when stimulated it will produce feelings of satiety/no motivation. When it's destroyed, the person will become so hungry that they basically overeat themselves to death. (Thank Ali Carollo for coming up with these mneumonic devices! :) )

Neurotransmitters were also discussed in the essay. Dopamine was the main player in this "seeking" addiction. It is apparently released when we find all these bits of "useless" information. I wonder if those with depression (having a lack of dopamine) spend more time than usual "seeking" in order to get their neurotransmitters back in balance. This is all very interesting for me; hopefully we'll find a cure for this troubling seeking addiction!

Wednesday, September 9, 2009

My First Thoughts on AP Composition

I'm enjoying myself more than I thought I would in this class! I really like having a small class of seven people. Everything is a lot more personal than if you're in such a large class. I have a feeling we'll all be a lot closer once the quarter is over...

The annotations we've done in class since school started are a lot more relevant and interesting, in my opinion. I didn't really understand what the point was in reading "Skunk Dreams" over the summer, but essays like "How to Write" really pertain to AP comp. I'm really hoping I can dramatically increase my writing skill level by the time the AP test rolls around.

I have to admit that I enjoyed reading my non-fiction book Act Like A Lady, Think Like A Man a lot more than I enjoyed writing the critical analysis about it. I went home on Friday completely clueless as to what this was (the powerpoint left me very confused). I spent a lot of time researching what a critical analysis should include, but it was still tremendously difficult to actually write the paper! Now that the rough draft's done, I feel like I've made it over the hill!

I'm excited to discover what else we'll be writing about and reading. I'm very glad I decided to take this class instead of some other AP ones!

Thursday, September 3, 2009

How I Write

When I write, I follow several guidelines that all blend together into my unique style. I generally try to make all of my papers optimistic/positive, even if I'm writing a piece that is disagreeing with a belief, value, etc. I don't think that people would want to read a paper that is filled with complaints and has a negative tone (I know that I wouldn't!). I also try to incorporate humor into my writing so I don't sound so uptight and harsh.

I'm a very structured writer. I hate messes and things that are thrown together. I love to sit down and plan what I'm going to write before I actually do it. This helps me save time while I'm writing because I already have a blueprint.

I also use good grammar and punctuation in my writing. As a result, my writing seems more sophisticated and less childish.

One thing that I'd really like to improve when I write is my vocabulary. This is definitely my weakest area academically. I am trying to look up new words and also use a thesaurus constantly in order to improve my word bank.

Monday, August 17, 2009

Response to 'Act Like a Lady, Think Like a Man'

For my non-fiction book, I chose a book written by Steve Harvey. It's called "Act Like a Lady, Think Like a Man." This title caught my attention while reading through the New York Times Bestseller list.

Overall, I enjoyed reading this book. I also learned a lot about the opposite sex; it was almost as if I found a copy of their playbook! However, I think this book was not targeted at seventeen-year-old girls. I felt like Harvey was frequently referring to topics that do not pertain to teenagers, such as myself. He talked a lot about how to introduce your boyfriend to your children, sexual stuff, etc. Don't get me wrong, he did give lots of beneficial advice on these important aspects of a relationship. I felt like Harvey wrote this book for single women in their upper twenties to mid-thirties who have children and are desperately looking for "the one," but having no such luck. Hopefully his wisdom will help these ladies out! Also, there were lots of examples of situations, etc. that Harvey seemed to cater to the African-American race that wouldn't really help out a white person like me. Obviously this is because Steve Harvey is African-American, so he knows a thing or two about it!

One thing that I did not enjoy much was Steve Harvey's personal stories. Some of them were necessary to support his beliefs, but it seemed like some were just filler stories. For example, he would write about ex-girlfriends and his experience with them, but it didn't do anything beneficial for his book. There weren't really any lessons he learned, the point of those stories were basically, "I dated this girl, and she wasn't the one for me."

All negative opinions aside, I thoroughly did enjoy reading "Act Like a Lady, Think Like a Man." It was nice to find out that men generally think the same, as opposed to how complex every woman is. I'll save you the lengthy summary (for now--I'm sure we'll be discussing the books in class.) Harvey covered every aspect of a relationship in this book, including: how men think, how men love, what men need, what scares men, playthings vs. the marrying type, mama's boys, cheating, standards, the ninety-day rule, meeting your kids, strong women, how to get the ring, and a q&a chapter filled with answers women have been longing for.

My favorite chapter in the book was titled 'Strong, Independent--and Lonely--Women.' I enjoyed it because it had so much valuable information, a story that made me cry, and some of Harvey's viewpoints that I totally disagree with. Harvey states that women are the driving force of men--without us, men would be filthy animals living off beer and pizza and going to strip clubs all the time. Men are looking for a woman to love and take care of. In Harvey's words, "To us, your power comes from one simple thing: you're a woman, and we men will do anything humanly possible to impress you so that, ultimately, we can be with you. . . You're the ultimate prize to us." The upsetting thing for Harvey and other men around the world is that women want to be very independent. I greatly disagree with this whole section of the chapter. Harvey states that women these days have been raised to believe that women aren't seen as that important to men and that they should get great jobs and be independent women, even if it means denying a serious relationship. Of course, all men want to "protect, provide, and profess" their love for women, but we make it impossible to do so when we refuse them the opportunity to protect and provide because we're strong and independent. Harvey states that at some point, women need to back down and just be a 'lady.' Let a man take care of you because that's what he genuinely wants to do. Harvey says being a lady is a lost art form--it's time to relax and let men do the hard work while we sit back and appreciate them. I translated this to, "Women should act cute and helpless while men do all the dirty work." Hmm...does this remind anyone of the Mary Wollstonecraft essay? She stated that women SHOULDN'T act like this--and I totally agree with her!! I believe that a strong, independent woman is happier than a weak, dependent woman. We don't need men to make us happy!

Even though I didn't agree with Harvey on this, he did share a personal story that made me realize that some women are WAY too overboard about being independent. One of Harvey's friends was at the grocery store and all he wanted was one bottle of pineapple juice (his favorite.) THAT'S IT...ONE BOTTLE. When his girlfriend was turned away, he grabbed the bottle and put it in the cart. She immediately discovered the juice and went balistic. He replied that the juice was all he wanted to be happy, and what did she do in return? She spit at him and said, "You've got no money!" Then smashed the glass bottle of pineapple juice at his feet, and stormed away. The man left the store and obediently sat next to her car, tears in his eyes. He loyally helped her load the groceries, even though he was hurt. This woman didn't allow the man a chance to provide for her, so shortly after he left her. Maybe I'm just a very sensitive or emotional person, but this story brought tears to my eyes.

Overall, this book was very beneficial for me to read. I think once I'm looking to get married I will read it again. Every woman should reading this book before getting into a serious relationship! Thank you Steve Harvey for writing the key to a happy relationship!!

Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Response to "The Prevailing Opinion of a Sexual Character Discussed"

I'm not quite sure if anyone else feels the way I do, but this article was a killer to read! I think it was mainly due to the antiquity of the language. Wollstonecraft's sentences were so long and confusing that by the time I finally reached the end of the sentence, I completely forgot what she said in the beginning. It would've been a lot easier to comprehend if she sorted out her different thoughts into separate sentences.

I was more confused about the first half of the essay than the second half. Nearly every paragraph left me with many questions! I found it interesting that she was such an avid writer and also married her friend, but unfortunately she died shortly after. I think that Wollstonecraft was thinking very radically compared to the other women of her time, or at least she had the guts to state her very bold opinions!

The opinions of Milton and Rousseau were insulting, to put it lightly. There were several instances where they mentioned that the purpose of women was merely to 'gratify the senses of man.' It was almost unbearable to read these sexist remarks over and over again! It was almost as if women were inferior slaves to men with absolutely no rights to do or say as they please. If I were a woman living back in the 18th century, I wouldn't have put up with sexism! I'm pleased that Wollstonecraft had enough courage to publish her beliefs. I wonder if she was ever strongly criticized for writing such frank remarks.

The essay also discussed how women were dependent of men. It was almost as if they were nothing unless they were with a man. But what good does it do to be with someone if you're only there to satisfy their desires? I wouldn't be a happy camper if I had to serve a man but I wasn't respected or treated like a woman should be. It's strange how much they relied on men as compared to the current day. We now hear songs on the radio such as "Single Ladies," "I Don't Need a Man," and "I Belong To Me." This may be a result from our obvious increase in women's rights in the last few centuries. I do belive, however, that women do not need to have a relationship to define who they are! In my opinion, I think we all would much rather prefer to live in freedom as compared to the poor women in the 18th century being tied down with a ball and chain.

I think that sexism still lives on today to a degree. Even though it is frequently denied, it is still there. Title IX was created to ensure that all women would have equal treatment with sports, but still women are seen as inferior as athletes. Why is so much emphasis placed on the way that women look when men are off the hook so easily? And why is it that men are viewed as smarter than women when clearly women are taking over the world? The ratio of boys to girls in college has dramatically changed, with women greatly outnumbering them. It is also true that men make more money than women even though they have the exact same job! We have also never had a woman president, even though a woman could definitely handle the job. Just because America started with certain traditions doesn't mean that they shouldn't be allowed to change with our society over time. I hope that women's rights will continue to soar as time goes on and one day both sexes can be treated as virtually equal.

Monday, July 13, 2009

Response to "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"

I was frightened after reading this article (I don't know if Carr intended for readers to feel that way or I'm just paranoid). Carr stated that frequent use of the internet can lead us to think differently--mostly in a negative way. Because of such brief writings posted all over the internet, it makes deep reading and thinking a struggle for most people. I've experienced nearly every symptom he describes (difficulty reading, lack of attention, etc.) but I would have never attributed it to my frequent internet use! This seems legitamite, but maybe I'm just gullible.

Look at me right now, a prime example of Carr's beliefs. As I browse through the article trying to find the best points to talk about, I become easily distracted and check my facebook. I also recall texting frequently while trying to read the essay just a few days earlier. Where has my attention gone?!?!

It is true that my generation spends a great deal of time on the internet as compared to older generations. Is it really possible that something like the internet is the reason why my mother can sit down and read for hours (she rarely uses the computer) while I willingly will not do such a thing?

I found the sections about how the internet effects cognition and neural networks fascinating. The brain's plasticity is amazing (I learned about it in AP psych)! It's awesome how our brain can adjust to changes in our environment. Some people undergo serious brain surgery and they are able to fully recover, so I suppose a subtle change such as frequent internet use could adjust the way our brain functions.

It was amusing to read the paragraphs about how clocks also changed our brains and how Socrates thought writing would ruin us all. I liked the quote, "When the mechanical clock arrived, people begain thinking of their brains as operating 'like clockwork.' Today, in the age of software, we have come to think of them operating 'like computers.'" I still can't get over the fact that these certain inventions can totally change how the human race thinks! I can't believe Socrates had such a negative opinion on the written word. The truth is that without writing, there would be no records of anything, no books, no knowledge! Writing is so vital these days...and without writing what would we do on the internet?!?

In all, I hope that the future adults of America aren't forming into computer zombies. I know I do not want to become one, yet I can't help my frequent internet use. Maybe I should end this blog and sit outside and delve into a long novel to save my soul.

Monday, July 6, 2009

Response to "Skunk Dreams"

There were some things I really liked about this essay, but it also didnt enjoy some parts of it.

Louise Erdich's descriptive voice made it really easy to visualize the entire essay. I felt like I was almost there with her when she talked about sleeping on the football field, walking through the forest, and sneaking into the wildlife park. She also used a lot of unique phrases and analogies (Ex: the Chinese sage problem) to spice up the story! I think that the story would've been pretty weak without all of the powerful words she used..

I like how she focused the essay around a skunk, even though it wasn't the main point of the story. Erdich learned many lessons about life, but chose to portray some of them through a skunk. She was also very curious about skunks (how they dream, what they feel, etc.). I found this interesting because I've never really given much thought to skunks (or any animal, for that matter) and contemplated what they dream about or how they live their lives. Sometimes it's good to be able to take another person's point of view, which is exactly what Erdich did.

Despite the descriptive phrases, I did not like some of the general vagueness of the story. It left me with a lot of basic questions (what? how? why? when?) that she could have easily added in the essay. Why did she want to sleep on a football field in the first place? I'm a teenage girl, too, and believe me, that is one of the last places I'd willingly sleep! I want to know the reason behind her decision. Also, what is the Chinese Sage problem? Maybe I just haven't been exposed to the world much, but she could've added a sentence or two to inform the readers. Erdich also talks about how skunk smells are a reality-enhancing experience, but she never explains how or why she feels that way. I also am curious of the time frame of this story--when did she move to new England? She never really tells how old she was when any of these events happened! I think if she would've added more of these tiny details, the story could've been a lot stronger and less confusing!

I really enjoyed hearing small bits about dream analysis. I took AP Psychology last year (my favorite class!) and we learned all about dream analysis and psychotherapy, which were both mentioned in this essay...psychology is everywhere! Sometimes objects represent certain problems or thoughts in one's life, so it was fun for me to hear her dream about the fence. Usually a big fence or wall signifies a problem in one's life. I thought the essay would somehow shift to a problem in her life, but I was incorrect. I think this dream was more of a foreshadowing of things to come for her. When I got closer to the end and saw the paragraph describing the fence to the game park, I realized that it was exactly like her dream.

The biggest question I have is why skunks? How could something so simple as a skunk change Erdich? After the football field incident and walking through forests, Erdich realizes that if she could be an animal she'd want to be a skunk. What a strange choice! I guess we all go through life-changing experiences that may make total sense to us, but puzzle others.

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Response to "Talk of the Town"

Gun control has been a very "hot" topic for quite some time now. Although I, personally, do not know much about it, I do know that many people go crazy over this topic.

I totally agreed with the authors that this gun situation has gotten out of hand. Adam Gopnik was right when he brought up the fact that the Virginia Tech shooter was clearly disturbed/mentally ill, but he was still allowed to buy guns that are only used for killing. Shouldn't background checks be conducted to see what kind of people are acquiring these harmful weapons? Why are these guns even available for purchase in the United States? It makes sense to need them for war and such, but there is no point in selling them at the corner gun store! Shouldn't it be obvious for the store owner to see that these guns primarily kill people and are not used for hunting game, etc.?

Another great point made by Gopnik was that the time to talk about security is not AFTER the terrorist attack has already happened. Once something happens, it's not like we can just go back in time and erase it! It is more important to prevent something before it happens than let tragedy occur and have innocent people die.

The essay also explained that after tragic incidents in various countries occurred, their gun control laws changed and as a result, there haven't been any more mass shootings. However, after everything that has happened in the United States, gun control laws have stayed fairly the same. There is a direct correlation between gun control and violence; why can't U.S. legislators see that? Of course, we can't control everything that happens, but we can dramatically reduce our risk by not letting any person buy harmful guns.

Susan Sontag's portion of the essay was extremely negative. I found it humorous that she called Bush "robotic." I agree that it seems like public officials want to always express their confidence and grief management...

Maybe I'm being too close-minded or concerned, but I do believe that guns are becoming a larger and larger issue that needs to be fixed! How many more incidents like Virginia Tech and Columbine will it take before reform occurs? Somewhere between easy access and no access to guns is probably the best for America at this point.

Monday, June 15, 2009

A Little Bit About Myself :)

Hi Everyone-- Here is some information about myself...Enjoy!! :)

To start off with some basic facts about myself...I'm an only child living with my mom and dad. I do not have any pets :( My family loves to travel all around the world together. Some of my favorite vacations include Italy, California, and MEXICO! (Which I am leaving for in one week!) I am currently employed at Buffalo Wild Wings and Bourbon Street Grille. I have worked at BWW for two years and I love it! I am working at BSG just for the summer. Most people would describe me as quiet/reserved, but those who know me well can see that I'm actually the opposite!

In my free time, I love going shopping. I could shop at any store--and all day! My all-time favorite mall is the Scottsdale Fashion Square in Scottsdale, Arizona. It is 6 blocks long and has the best stores ever!

I also enjoy exercising. I am currently taking ballet, jazz, modern, and lyrical dance classes. I've been in dance for 13 years! I'm also an avid snowboarder during the winter-- I live on the slopes! When I have free time, I also do pilates, yoga, and kickboxing. It's a good way to relieve stress!

EATING is another one of my favorite pastimes. I'm pretty much like a human garbage disposal. My favorite food is sushi, with weiner schnitzel a close 2nd. I also love any type of Mexican food...yum..anyone hungry yet?!?

Like any other teenager, I love to spend time with my friends. My best friend, Taylor, and I like to go on crazy adventures. Recently, we went on a road trip to the Dells to visit an old friend from Florida, and we went shopping to buy outfits for a crazy photoshoot we're doing (oh, I will definitely post some pictures!) I love going out with friends and occasionally just staying in watching a movie or hanging out.

One of my favorite things in life is music! I play the piano and the guitar (I actually teach piano and guitar lessons!) I also love to listen to music. Some of my favorite bands include The Audition, Mayday Parade, Between the Trees, and Silverstein. Of course, I love to listen to any type of music that you can dance to :)

I am really close with my family...we spend a lot of time together! My parents are really supportive of me and always do their best to help me out. I wouldn't be the person I am today without all that they've done to help me succeed!!!

One last thing (I hope you all haven't fallen asleep by now---I just have a lot to say!!) I was a representative for Larsen Portrait Design this year for senior pictures. Now they haven't asked me to promote them in any way, but they really are an amazing studio! I would recommend them in a heartbeat to anyone looking for amazing senior pictures. Lee Larsen is a great photographer that really makes every picture stunning! I actually found out this afternoon that Lee chose me to be a SPA (Senior Portrait Artist) Model---Many prestigious photographers participate in this program every year and choose their favorite representative/model for the year and enter them in this contest. The finalists get to go to San Diego and compete for the winning title---hopefully I can make it that far! (Wish me luck! ha) But anyways, if anyone is interested at all, talk to me...I have discount cards! :)

I hope you all have gotten to know a little bit more about me. I look forward to reading all of your blog posts!

xoxo
chelsea